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ssg-liberty
02-07-2009, 05:11 AM
This life is bull shit,
It has no meaning,
No purpose,
This life is not wanted,
This soul is severely damaged,
This soul is dead on the inside,
This soul has a living body but is dead,
It is trapped in this live body,
It dose not belong here,
But has no way to escape,
M16 to the head this soul is free,

xavierhonre
02-08-2009, 02:26 AM
Good poem, very expressive. I hope you're not feeling as hollow as this poem makes you sound...

~Xavier

ssg-liberty
02-08-2009, 11:15 PM
Good poem, very expressive. I hope you're not feeling as hollow as this poem makes you sound...

~Xavier

i was i worte 4 poems on friday i wrote what i felt pretty much, i feel loved now i got a girlfriend imma ask her out in front of friends even though she alredy said yes. :victory:

xavierhonre
02-08-2009, 11:46 PM
Make sure she's okay with that. LOL.

ssg-liberty
02-09-2009, 12:08 AM
she is we were talking about it today when she was here.

Star
02-09-2009, 08:10 PM
Wow, it's pretty sad...
But yeah, I hope you're not feeling like that anymore
Congrats on the girlfriend~
:red_heart:

ssg-liberty
02-10-2009, 03:30 AM
Thanks